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Character: Quinevere(damn owner can't decide)
Owned by ~SM-Avoine
Game: Feral Hearts

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:iconsm-avoine:
SM-Avoine Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
faaaaaak juuuuu ^
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Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:?
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:iconsm-avoine:
SM-Avoine Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
:'D damn owner.. Ihan olet oikeassa, kunhan kettuilen x)
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I wouldn't agree fully, i don't get any feelings off them, boring to read.

Dry would be another reason to explain, and the one you promoted Especially, was closer to horrible to even try to read and get a hang off, i needed to think too hard to even try to feel it.
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David-Davidson Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
NO WAY! Now I know there's a language gap, all of those poems, particularly the last, exhibited really beautiful combinations of prose and imagery, great creativity throughout.
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
In your own opinion yes, creativity might be, but no, not in my mind.

Sorry for not having your brain :shrug:


have a beer :ahoy:
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:icondavid-davidson:
David-Davidson Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
BEER: THE INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed!:thumbsup:
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:icondavid-davidson:
David-Davidson Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Really poor poetry. No structure that might be added by rhyming, but still limited in form by repetition of a particularly overused phrase: "make it stop."
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Limited in usable space too, tell me, what is good poetry?
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:iconsm-avoine:
SM-Avoine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
Niin Daq ;) niin minä...
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
ai Daq, anteeksi vaihdan <.<
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:iconsm-avoine:
SM-Avoine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
ei hitto, anteeksi minun moka! Quihan se siinä x'D siskokset on vain niin samannäköisiä että huh. sorisorisorisori!
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
No just :lol:

muutin toinen kerta :dummy:
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:iconsm-avoine:
SM-Avoine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
anteeksianteeksi :'D
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Joo joo :p
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