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One day after another
We strive to work for another

One day after another
We strive to love one the other

Day after day
My feelings i will display

I am not here to play
Because my feelings i will display

One day after another
I am here for you like any other

Because my feelings are true
Because, i love you

You have dreams hopes and views
I pray, to see you one day in the celebrity news

You have pain scars and sorrows
I want you to remember i'm there to share your sorrows

Weight of the world is on your shoulder
I will hold your hand before every other

Disbelief discouragement Frightened
I'll be there with trust courage and a shoulder

Because this is the longest comment ever made by me.
It's also to the person who i most care about, you

Rhyming isn't my strong point.
You are my hearts safe harbor.

I love you, every word is true.
Please, let me be there for you

Weight of the world is on your shoulders.
I'm here, so you can pass over the weight.

My words are few and simple.
My mind is worried and confused.

I don't know what i'd do without you.
Because i love you, that is true.

Let love be the guiding light.
That guides you in dimming lights.

I know pain, i know agony.
I feel your pain, as a symphony.

I don't know what to write anymore.
My ideas has ran out, into words three

I Love You

Because it's true

Whatever you chose to do.
I am there for you.

Whatever you chose to do.
I don't blame you.

Whatever you choose to do.
I love you
A love poem
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ginkoflowers Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011   Digital Artist
It's a beautiful poem! :) I especially like how you say rhyming isn't your strong point and then start not to write in rhyme, it's an interesting use of words. And the content, what to say... the person you wrote this thinking of is very lucky, I think. :)
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Orkekum Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconbowplz:
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ginkoflowers Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011   Digital Artist
:iconclappingplz:
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Darklightx6 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
This is so beautiful it makes me say those words for someone. I wish I could have some person who could hear those words ♥ Well done.
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Orkekum Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You'll have in time :thumbsup:
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SigmaDragonis Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sööttiä. :)
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Orkekum Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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SigmaDragonis Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Xopalle? ;)
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Orkekum Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
tää runo on niin vanha etta en edes tuntenut Xoopaa <.<

Ja kohta on tulos kaksi lyriikkaa, Ain Suojaan, ja duetto The angel and the Devil
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SigmaDragonis Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok. :)
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