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Walking on the road
Is it a road to heaven?
Is it a road to hell..

Every step hurts
from my feet up my legs
Aching from walking
but i can't stop

Every step hurts
inside me
Nothing to fill the emptiness
Can nothing but cry

Every step hurts
In my arms
No one to hold
Nothing but my life

Every step hurts
in my heart
No one to pcik up the shards
No one to love

Every step hurts
i wont stop walking
i want this pain to end
i want my heart to find rest
i want my arms to find someone to hold
i want someone to fill me
i want someone to rest with..
a poem..
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mklamarie Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
:'( this is so gorgeous and deep

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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
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:hug:
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mklamarie Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
hehehe
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VWStiti Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
Kaunis runo :clap: aika surumielinen, mut hienoo tekstiä :)
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
kiitoksia :iconbowplz:
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VWStiti Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
Oles hyvä! :D
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W-H-A-M2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Its not that people like to read and long for depressed poems, it's the way it's written that gives even a single word a feeling. It also let's others know they are not alone in having these feelings. Anyone can write a word that describes an emotion, but being able to place the words in a way that actually is able to be felt is what makes it popular. I can feel your emotions in this writing. :clap:
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
well, that may be it, thank you :iconbowplz:
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W-H-A-M2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you are WELC:blowkiss:ME
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Hidan4eTheBest Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome :clap:
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:iconorkekum:
Orkekum Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconbowplz:
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Hidan4eTheBest Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
people seem to like my depressed poems more :icondeathstareplz:
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Hidan4eTheBest Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha xD
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
let me post two more poems and see what people think <.<
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Hidan4eTheBest Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe xD
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TheLizardLord Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Student Writer
Jag gillar den skarpt!:D
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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TheLizardLord Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Student Writer
Den är väldigt fin!:D
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Orkekum Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
tackar :iconbowplz:
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TheLizardLord Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Student Writer
You're Welcome!:D
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